This is really good. You use a lot of good patterns and the style you wrote this in is really good. The repetition is especially good. The only mistake is I think you meant to say "Three cups of tea" where you said "Three cups a tea"
This is a really cool way to write about an independent novel. I love the poetry marrie dto the use of images so that technology sereves your purpose. an awesome example of creatively responding.
This is really good. You used a lot of repetitive patterns! it puts a lot of effect on the poem. This poem really made me think about those poor children. Great job! you are seriously a good poet.
This is really good. You use a lot of good patterns and the style you wrote this in is really good. The repetition is especially good. The only mistake is I think you meant to say "Three cups of tea" where you said "Three cups a tea"
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool way to write about an independent novel. I love the poetry marrie dto the use of images so that technology sereves your purpose. an awesome example of creatively responding.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good. You used a lot of repetitive patterns! it puts a lot of effect on the poem. This poem really made me think about those poor children. Great job! you are seriously a good poet.
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