Dew
Little droplets of water everywhere
Drop
Rain has cascaded off a leave
Macaw
Mighty parrots fly above
Wow
The words that are able to escape me
Screech
A Monkey in a tree
Tweet
Little bird has hatched and embraced life
Munch
Someone's eating dinner
Amazement
The only feeling I have inside
Whoosh
Water goes rushing pass
Burr
Morning cold wraps around me
Rustling
Hiding is taking place
Sigh
I must leave now and remember this sight, the only
word to fit perfectly is a big long sigh
I love it! I like how you had one word, and then you described it. Your an awesome poet.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you worked with spacing, and control the meter by spacing. The waterfall as a symbol is really evident here too, and that use makes it work well aas a peom. Very good. You definitely get the idea of how poetry works. I'm looking forward to your next poem.
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